Targets to improve my Independent Study!!

What went well?
- Good sense of genre and key institutional details included.
- Good understanding of the text is shown through-out the essay
- Great use of research, linked to the text. (Representation of women, Asians, abusive men)
- Good use of SHEP and MIGRAIN linked them together.

Targets
- Firstly, I should make more analysis of key scenes in the film.
- Provide more examples in the film, when I raise an issue
- Link my paragraphs all together (make them all flow better)
- Talk about second wave feminism, how have progressed e.c.t....link to the zeitgeist

Bibliography improvements
-Put on my Internet sites I researched on
-State the works cited and consulted
- Layout the films/ television research better

Next Step
My next step would be including more examples from he text to back up some things i am stating. Also, i need to carry out a full genre analysis of Bollywood(using repertoire of element sheet). i should also try and include more on ideologies.